Practice GMAT Sentence Correction Question
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A recent decision made by the United States Attorney for the Southern District of New York, who many consider a leading contender for a cabinet appointment, is both seen by most legal observers as a savvy political maneuver and an abrogation of professional responsibility.
Correct Answer: B
There are two main issues in this question.
(1) the subject pronoun who in the phrase who many consider a leading contender should be the object pronoun whom since the Attorney is the object (i.e., many [people] is the subject and the Attorney is the one being acted upon or considered).
(2) the sentence should use the idiom both x and y where x and y are parallel such that the sentence is structured as follows: is seen ...both x and y (i.e., both a savvy political maneuver and an abrogation of professional responsibility). The original version improperly states: is both seen...x and y
- the object pronoun whom should replace the subject pronoun who; the idiom both x and y is not properly used
- the object pronoun whom replaces the subject pronoun who; the idiom both x and y is properly used
- the idiom both x and y is not properly used
- the object pronoun whom should replace the subject pronoun who
- the phrase whom is seen as a leading contender for a cabinet appointment is improper as there is nobody acting upon the object (represented by the object pronoun whom); the phrase is seen as a leading requires a subject (for the verb is and yet there is no subject, only an object)
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